This is such an amazing poem. it is one of the few poems that can completely flow and keep me captured without rhyme. Excellent write.

Thankyou for ur gorgeous comment on my poem 'conscription'. meant so much. =)
my best wishes,
xxx

First- thanx for the comment tiz one of my favorites that one there :D
Second- i really liked this poem, its pretty much me in your words. definalty 5/5