My Love For You

by Yrem Crish   Jul 2, 2006


Do you know,my love for you is true,
The every beat of my heart is only for you,
If you never know, why don't you try?
To look inside my heart the feeling is hide.

No one's still in my heart but only you,
Even earth detains me to breath
still my feelings will linger and never fade;
and I surrender my life for you to know
How much I love you....

When I die and will be lost at your side,
don't be afraid co'z I'll be your guide,
I will let you feel the love that filled to my heart,
The love that I tend from the very start.

If God consent me to descend from heaven
to be born again as a new being;
I will love you more than those days before,
'Coz you are the only key of my heart's door
And,if heaven decides to get your life away from me
I will give my last breath to save you free.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueEyedGirl

    Thanks for taking the time to leave your comment and vote on my piece. i wanted to take the time and return the favor! i really like your work but i feel like you'd have an easier time expressing yourself if you worked on your english just a little more. i can tell what you're trying to say, but you have the wording wrong on a lot of things. like i said, i can see a lot of potential, but you need to hone up on your english just a bit :) nice work, and keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    When truth is known, difference is clear... Skillful blend of emotions, nicely secured on paper.. More grease..

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Beautiful love poem.
    I like the rhythm of your writing.

    Even earth detains me to breath - like it!

    In the third stanza; I'd remove the word co'z and put a comma after afraid,

    don't be afraid, I'll be your guide.

    very open and tender poem. very good!

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Do you know,my love for you is true,
    The every beats of my heart is only for you,
    If you never know, why don't you try?
    To look inside my heart the feeling is hide.
    its too hard and it hurt so nice poem love it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Glenn G

    I like your perspective on love

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