My new feelingz

by rob   Jul 2, 2006


So im ur babycakez nd u my cherry,
tha feelinz u give me it getz kinda scary,
but itz cuz ive never felt dis way for another,
these feelinz for u i cant hold or smother,
so ive let it out nd opened up bout my life,
hopin that one day ud be my wife,
ur tha only one i could say i love you to,
only one to gimme dez feelinz dat r new,
but now ur callin me papi nd u showin some love,
jus wanna be wit u even if u called me by my gov,
wish u was by my side or wit we wen i sleep,
if u ever left me id have to weep,
but if u said i love u id have to leap,
i aint tha type to let my emotionz get cheap,
but im tha type to spoil u wit tha love i possess,
i love u nd still waitin for tha day u say yes....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Well I see someone already told you about the stanza's which is good advice. I would say its kind of hard to read and understand at 1st because of the spelling and grammar, but after taking sometime I understood it and I think it is very sweet=) A nice feeling through out the poem, which is good. Well I wish I could be of more help=) But I'm all out.

    ~+Megan+~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, but instead of writing in a big paragraph or block, split it up into stanza's, it will make it easier to read
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