Hey whats up, I dont think theres nothing wrong with this poem i think its awsome just like your other poems well talk to u later bye bye

Great poem. 5/5. Good job making life and knife (common rhyme) an interesting duo, and not just a boring pair.

HOLLY FUK!!!
This is what the note will read:
"I loved you till my dieing day
My heart grew much weaker
Be happy is all I can say"

As my broken heart
Rips and tears in two
As again my red blood spills
Always remember my love for you

At the bottom of the letter signed:
"My love for you will leave me never
My shattered heart holds on to you
Because I've loved you since forever

BEST LINES EVA!! 5/5
i really like this poem......
you hav showen what u really feel witout saying the words out load...
although i can relate to it...im not in ur place to know how u really feel.... :(...great poem courtney.....
you should be happy and smiling that you got this real great talent :)

nami

I read this on your bebo site its really good hunni, ur poetry has come such a long way. xox sam