I Came, I Saw, I Conqured

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jul 2, 2006


*I came*
Into your life
Like any other girl would
*I saw*
How much you hurt those girls
Your not going to go through me
*I conqured*
I stood your pain
Laughed at your hateful words
I fought and beat with your heart
Whos the one standing now
You just got to think
Every girl is the same
Always got to think
Your going to win
Im made with steel
Ive been hurt so many times
I know how to block myself
From you
*I left*
Because I knew your game
*I knew*
Which ways youd play my heart
*I conqured*
Your own game
So tell me
Whos standing now
Cuz it aint you

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow....now i need to becaeful of boyz now...good poem!! i liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You need to work on your grammar.. You have fragmented sentences all over the place there and you didn't you one apstrophe. It really takes away from the whole poem... And this could be such a strong poem.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A love the style of this, the idea is a really good one and its been wriiten very well .

    -biscuit-

  • 18 years ago

    by C

    Aay guh
    dis poem wus igh...jus dat
    u should rhyme sum shii
    u nah mean ?
    anywayz,keep up da gd work
    PÉàçÉ

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