Trying

by crazy babe with no brains   Jul 2, 2006


I'm crying,
I'm trying,
I feel myself dieing.
If you were me,
you would be sighing.
I wish i was in heaven,
just flying.
Maybe then you'd see...
How much I've been trying.

By Anthea Garrad

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  • 18 years ago

    by crazy babe with no brains

    Thank you i will try and add some more on to it and keep checking back and let me know what you think many thanx anthea xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Aww sad little poem =[
    maby you should try and continue it im sure this would be a great start to a new peice =]
    anyways great write keep up the good work =]
    5/5
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxxx