I love this poem too!
you can almost feel the emotion.. its very deep x
view mine if you get a chance..

This was so simple and so deep. I can relate.

The poem was so great! The ending was like finally seeing what the writer/you was going through during the whole poem

On of the best.... 5/5

:O I'm speechless! Great write. 5/5 :)

Love love love it....

What comment I can give for this beautiful poem sarah ?

Well I m biya

I love this poem, u have showed so much feeling.. lots of words explain how i am/used to be/feel.. i have never read a poem that has this much feeling and depth to it.. its amazing, keep up the good work 5/5
xx talieka

All i have to say is i love this poem ...you have me speechless

Its a great poem ... I felt every word, amazing how you used different words and meanings to describe the pain differently at every line without repetition.

~Tammi~