God, Im scared to deatj,
[I think you meanto "death"]

I actually really liked this. And I'm not sure why. It was abit different to all the poems I've been reading lately. But yesh. Very good job! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow great poem i love the reson for it =] {if thatmakes any sense}
your a truly talented writer =]
great work keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

How about the title...
Dont Touch My Love?