Awwww your poem was so lovely!
so adorable and very enjoyable to read!
Idk, this poem is so perfect in my eyes..maybe because I can relate to it! I so felt every word that you wrote! perfect choice of words =)
I only have one criticism:: theres no need to capitalize the words, it is kinda confusing,lol!
but keep it up you're a sweet writer =)
great poem again
Luv
NemO
Thanks btw for your lovely words =) meant alot to me!~