Wish I Could

by Tamra   Jul 2, 2006


I wish I could help you
I wish I could make this untrue
The Depressions
and Therapy sessions
I wish I could make things alright
I wish I could make life seem bright
Razorblade kiss
I wish I could fix this
You're my brother and I love you so
I just thought I would let you know

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  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    It's sad, but you really care about your brother. I liked it. It really shows how much you love him. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem i really like it and your message is clear.
    great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow....very deep. You did a great job with the flow --Great write-it is flawless!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very sad poem. But, you showed how much you really care for your brother. And, for me. That makes this poem great. It was a tad short, and you could have gone deeper. But I did like it the way it is. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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