by Tamra Jul 2, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Screams go unheard |
by Lacey Rose
Its good! i love it! 5/5 |
So that was okay. Perhaps it was the words themselves that didn't make it great but the emotion contained within this short piece made up for that. Really thought that it was interesting. Not great on word play but cool on the emotional level. |
by shelle
This is a really great poem as all of your are keep it up :) and thank you for the comment but none of my poems are of personal experience :) thanks x shelle x |
Makes me want to hear more! want to READ more, actually. very good, short, yes, but good. |
Wow loved the poem..very deep..keep u the good work |