Truthful Lies

by SaveMe?   Jul 2, 2006


When I look into his eyes
All I see are truthful lies
To dead to be alive
But inside my hart has just survived

Finding it hard to breathe
My body starting to seethe
Screaming out so loud
Sorry I never made you proud

Like a pencil line
Around my hart it starts to twine
Getting thicker and hanging free
Hanging from -our- old tree

Swinging slowly back and forth
Pointing south then back at north
Love brings sadness and hate
But love I found and cant relate

He is my soul reason to live
Happiness only he can give
But soon he must leave
You wonder what are the stains upon my sleeve

Depression like a deep black pool
Sinking, trying to forget that school
Who would miss me?
Give me death and set me free

Dripping arm full of blood
First this bath I must flood
Then ill drown, in dark red and tears
Nothing is quite as it appears

Soothing darkness will overcome
Right half of my body going numb
I can no longer see
The imperfectness of me

All the notes written with care
To explain all my despair
Clean the knife again and again
But Even the sharpest blade cannot clear this pain

So cold
My story will never be told
Because I did not let it finish
This is me where I diminish

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    *sniff* suicide is such a hard thing on the mind. I guess I relate... it's my namesake poem, lol.

    "He is my soul reason to live
    Happiness only he can give
    But soon he must leave
    You wonder what are the stains upon my sleeve"

    Love is like that, it can tear people apart.
    Well, all I can say is that it was a great poem filled with darkness, and an almost sarcastic edge to it, a brave face.

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Ilysm Alice!
    But you are too good at poems and i shall steal your goodness from you! =D
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem. i love it.. its really deep adn has a lot of emotion in it.. its sad.. i can relate.. its a very good poem. it has great flow word choice and rhythm.. great job.. u have talent.. so keep writing adn i will keep reading.. keep it up.. keep ur head up high
    take care and stay strong
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Rather enjoyable yet not up to par with others....but that was great and yet not great....I thought that the flow had been off every so often yet still it was interesting.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ_Bethany_ღ

    Hey hun! this is ace! jus lyk all of them! lol! ur such a gud writer! aw sixth form wz gd 2day wish u wer ther wiv me 2day...wud hav been ace! bt ur too young :(:(:( which sucks! anyways keep checkin my poems! =] luvyas hun xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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