Hey hun! this is ace! jus lyk all of them! lol! ur such a gud writer! aw sixth form wz gd 2day wish u wer ther wiv me 2day...wud hav been ace! bt ur too young :(:(:( which sucks! anyways keep checkin my poems! =] luvyas hun xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Rather enjoyable yet not up to par with others....but that was great and yet not great....I thought that the flow had been off every so often yet still it was interesting.
~Faith

Amazing poem. i love it.. its really deep adn has a lot of emotion in it.. its sad.. i can relate.. its a very good poem. it has great flow word choice and rhythm.. great job.. u have talent.. so keep writing adn i will keep reading.. keep it up.. keep ur head up high
take care and stay strong
angie

Ilysm Alice!
But you are too good at poems and i shall steal your goodness from you! =D
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*sniff* suicide is such a hard thing on the mind. I guess I relate... it's my namesake poem, lol.

"He is my soul reason to live
Happiness only he can give
But soon he must leave
You wonder what are the stains upon my sleeve"

Love is like that, it can tear people apart.
Well, all I can say is that it was a great poem filled with darkness, and an almost sarcastic edge to it, a brave face.

//T.L.//