Loved it, keep it yp 5/5

Great Job. Really liked it. 5.

Wow. Awesome progression from happy to sad and a perfect illustration of how it fell apart...sad, but good poem Loved it.

I really liked this poem 5/5

Wowwww really good 5/5

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Loved it... its really good and shows lotz of emotion!!! keep up tha good work!!

**** brittney ****

Wow thats really powerful GREAT JOB YOU HAVE TALENT!

This is great i luv it ! rite from da heart