I liked the concept. I think I would have listed sterotypes I think I would have did it something like this.
I live my life as a stero type
Black, white, native, blonde
Placed in a group where I belong. and just continue with a rrthym of sorts. Althoughter a great premise. I try to have a rythm, but yours is a great example of freestyle

WOW-sooo true!! And I agree Museum I love the last two lines a lot. It's a great rap-up to the poem. The poem really held on to my interest the whole way through-Good write! 5/5

It was great! You expressed your words deeply!

I think we can all relate to that one. Really great write, I loved the ending although I agree with Museum that the beginning could have been a little stronger.

Great poem!! And very true!! It is awful to be judged and labeled by people who don't even know you!! 5/5

This was so very true!! I hate being labeled! I liked how you went into details about the stereotypes. The ending was my favorite part!

Cayce x

I loved it! its so true, we are all labelled, for things we do, they way we dress or the way we talk, and it is so unfair but it happens. I love the poem and the meaning and idea behind it, keep it up
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