The girl you think is perfect .....

by lanie luvs u x3   Jul 2, 2006


The day begins
the sun shines
its early
everything seems fine
as she steps
into the crowded hall
smile on her face
walking tall
watching th world
smile back cluelessly
while her heart
burns to ashes endlessly
she'll hide her pain
from her friends
and hopes one day
her pain will end
the door slams
and shes home
another day all alone
directing her looks
at her wrists
scars from before
clenching her fists
hiding it no longer
she lets it out
her heart so silently
screams and shouts
yet no one hears
because no one knows
about the past that haunts her
where ever she goes.

this is a true story about me a couple years ago. please comment and vote on it! thanks!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    Stunning flow.

    Short and to the point; Absolutely wonderful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    It is not just you but that poem portrays the feelings of sooo many poeple...thank you for writin it...excellently done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow...you seem so happy in your pic...there's a story behind every face i suppose. sorry that this was once you, but glad to hear it's in the past. nice poem! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    Great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeanie Copeland

    Good poem. But always know... there are plenty of us out there. Always someone to talk to!!