I really like this one too. I like the metaphors and such.. 5/5

That was amazing, it had a really cool feeling to it, it left my hairs on the back of my neck stand on end.
A-MA-ZING!
~Alissa

I like this poem you keep doing what you do you are very good, i've wrote some poems to check them out. _krisanta_

Great job, Tim! Keep it up!

Luv ya
Ash

If a guy ever wrote this about me omg... i'd be melting. Your amazing. I love the words you chose, & how you describe everything. B e a u t i f u l!

Thalliday xo