Comments : In the beginning its just a dream

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Beth

    Wow! that is an amazing poem! im just blown away! keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    Loved it lots.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostForever

    Hey, loved the poem.
    i dont know if u remember me at all but i wondered where u are, havent spoken to u in ages. this will sound really strange if u dont remember me!
    xxxx
    alexe

  • 18 years ago

    by LostForever

    Oh yeah....if u do remember me then add me so we can talk! where have u been? u ok?
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by LostForever

    Abkaratikid@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Y U Wanna Change Me~

    I like how u compared it to a seed thats was good

  • 18 years ago

    by X.x Ashamite x.X

    Amazing work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    I love how you put in some quotes... it just tied it in together better....

    its great how you compared it to a seed... ur very talented and amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Wow, good job again! Keep up the good work. I hope you'll write more soon. You're really talented!!

    Luv ya
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Aww.. that was so beautiful. Keep writting!

    Thalliday xo