Truely a work of a poem master.. it was soo vivid.. it was beautiful.. yet it had something to it.. something more beyond.. words.. hard to explain i suppose.. its was great

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Once again, I've commented on this a long time ago...but I can't help but leave another one because it's just so good! I really don't know how you come up with so many new and unique poems...you are so talented. I just wish I could write as well as you! :)
~Midnight Sun

OMG!! This is amazing! this poem is an imbodyment of talent! I love is so much

Such imagery! That was a great poem. I love:

She rapes the air with claw like hands
Gnarled fingers toil with greed
Smothering all with murky bands
Leaving her putrid brood to feed

I can actually see her hands in my mind. Great job!

Really nice.