Not that great for a vamp poem. And I love vampire poems. Perhaps I had higher expectations than I should have. In that case this though still not as good as it could be was good with the words. And also the imagery was cool except...there's something that I didn't like about the mention of time. Comparing to cigarettes was cool though. It wsa something that could be easily recognized etc.
~Faith

"century�s clock"
Did the site's mad obsession with correct spelling screw the word up? Seems it did. Evil spelling obsession, not letting anything other than the english alphabet. Grr to systems.
Lovely poem though. What more can I say? Brilliant, as always.

Very interesting I loved the use of metaphores and everything in this one. beautiful, not to many people fill vampire poems with such interesting metaphores and make them work, but you did so congrats.