Learning to Fall

by Rain   Jul 3, 2006


Shes learning to fall
Shes learning to ask
Shes learning what its like
To face this task
She is learning still
To be on her own
To live far away
To live all alone.
Shes learning to cope
With such a loss as this
Shes learning to live
Without that candy kiss

Shes learning to fall
Learning to make mistakes
Shes learning to break
Learning to fight the stakes
Shes learning to live
Learning to live through death
Learning to breathe
Through another last breathe
Shes learning without him
Shes learning to fall
Shes trying to forget
And not to recall

Shes learning to fall
Shes learning to live
Live without him
Live to forgive

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that was good.. usually i dont like it when people use a lot of repitition but this worked well.. its a very good life poem and was very inspirational! good job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Cool, I liked the title of this poem. It really did catch my eye. Rhymes were alright, good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This had a wonderful flow and a really sweet theme. The only thing I'm personally not keen is the limited vocab.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacey

    LOVED this poem :D

    some of your rhymes were a little ordinary, but i really really liked this line:

    "Learning to breathe
    Through another last breathe"

    Well done girl! keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This is a really good poem. It flowed nicely and I really like the topic of it. The only errors I found are these two (Laura already caught the first one):

    ''Learning to live though death''
    Though should be through
    ''Live without hiim''
    hiim has an extra ''i''

    Besides this it is perfect! Great write---5/5

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