I thought it was a great poem. A very powerful message. Especially the last line.
I look forward to reading your other poems.

Wow, it has a great message for others.everyone should look back to them selves at some point in life.
great poem 5/5

Omg, this was soo deep! I really liked how you`re trying to define yourself and standing up to what you`ve become. I really enjoyed this poem - I`ll go r/r/c a couple more of your poems!
Great job dear!!
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Wow, Arcane Blondie, that was such a perfect message! You spelt it out to me in black and white. Dont worry, if I ever saw you, I would look at you with the same glance I give to people I understand. Cos I understand, I truly do. Just dont get lost behind that black makeup and clothes. You may be faded, but not completely lost. Never Forget!

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Nice job, very good imagery, you can still work on the flow

Who have I become?
Is this really me?
Yes- is the answer echoed by my heart.
[I really liked those lines!]

This was also a great poem. This is kinda something I've been wanting to write about for awhile, but just couldn't get the right words out.

I liked it alot. You have great talent. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Thats cool that you painted your nails black and the middle red....neat

Thank you so much for the comment on my poem! i really appreciate it...
now about yours, it was really good, my only sugestion would be to change "echoed" to "echoes"...it gives a more everlasting impression...like still going.
i loved it!
keep it up!

Very very tingling. i can alos relate to this. very much so. i loved it start to finish with every fibre in my body. absolutely fabulous.

Wow sweetie, it was just Wow!! That is what i say about it...i do the same thing all of the time..i feel like a totally different person when i look at myself in the mirror..but this poem described most of my feelings too..it was great!!

'My message to the stereotypical world'

Wow! That line really made a huge impact on the poetry. The way you portray yourself through your own eyes. And the way you ask and answer your own questions.

Great poem.

Peace. [Sole]

I love your poem and just want you to know that you shouldn't be ashamed of what you've become because you are who you are!!! There's nothing wrong with that

Gabi

It's not my style of writing, but I loved the message...for it purtains to me so well. Staring in the mirror asking if this is really me...It amazes me sometimes that it is. Great job portraying that.

xDarkSuicidex5.5

Ohh.. wow! That was a good poem.
I know the feeling. That reminded me of my teenage years, where I use to stare into the mirror and question my life, myself and everything around me. Really good poem.