Beautiful. one of the best imagry poems i have read for a long time.

Ruby

I like the sensational imagery used. There's a few lines I'm unsure about what is going on. For instance, escaping every corner -- I get the notion it has to do with fluidity, but I'm not sure.

'Cracks still seep in my heart'

Cracks don't seep, but through them things do.

From around the third stanza it seems like you've lost your focus, or focused too much on one aspect.

Shadows of the shade is redundant.

I liked it, but thought an edit could do some good.

Maybe this one is my favorite? Maybe not? I don't know. But I am adding you to my favorites... I like your work. But this one was excellent. Again, your choice of words. It flowed beautifully and it had a very deep expression behind it. I loved it.

I'm not liking how some of your poems are downvoted. You really deserve better for this one! A good way to end the poem. Liked the rhymes in this one too.