...wow, that left me speechless....Totally breathtaking poem---That was so deep and so powerful. I love how you told a little of their stories then went back and said how you feel after it had happened-- Great write! and Im sorry that this has happened to you-Death is such a hard thing to get through---5.5 on the poem----stay strong and I hope things get easier for you!

Awww omg I am so sorry to hear all this, which I deathly hope is not true. Wonderful poem, really sad but totally emotional. Great words. Keep it up!

Woah... raw emotion in this poem...
I'm speechless.. yet impressed you managed to get it into words.
I can't imagine the feelings...
*Gem*