When We First Met

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Jul 3, 2006


Sweeping colors lined with stars
Glowed from shimmering eyes to eyes
Butterflies swarmed around inside
Hand in hand, establishing ties

My lips dropped in crimson dew
Gazing upon my fairytale prince
Words stuttering out my mouth
Been together ever since

You smiled nervously at me
Wondering what was true love
Peering at my pearl white gown
Appearing like an angel above

Leaves danced around our souls
Drenching us in gentle mirth
Whispering to our bashful face
Our lives turned to a new birth

Shimmering in the sunset sky
Like children we pounced along
A lovestruck pair, you and I
Giggling till the brilliant dawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Aww this is so sweet i like it great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Beautifully written! Wonderful flow, and great descriptions for each of the different feelings and emotions. I really loved it! Check out either one of my poems here, you may like them, I don't know...

    Sun and Rain
    Plucked Daisy

    Great job again 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, Noni. This was brillantly written. I loved how you worded this one so much. Your flow was great and so was your rhyming. I don't see ANYTHING that should be changed. It was great from start to finish. Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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