Wow, Noni. This was brillantly written. I loved how you worded this one so much. Your flow was great and so was your rhyming. I don't see ANYTHING that should be changed. It was great from start to finish. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Beautifully written! Wonderful flow, and great descriptions for each of the different feelings and emotions. I really loved it! Check out either one of my poems here, you may like them, I don't know...

Sun and Rain
Plucked Daisy

Great job again 5/5

Aww this is so sweet i like it great job 5/5