"as never been so deep..."
I think you mean HAS never been so deep.

I loved this!! It was really a good song, but it`s somewhat depressing. But that`s okay, because in my opinion, most of music`s biggest successes are depressing. So I loved it, a lot.
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Amazing! ur poems become mor amazing each time. these is very, very, very deep. i hope it becomes a song:)

I would be interested to see how this sounds as music. I think putting a bridge in and shortening the verses could be good but i like the angle you're looking at. Very interesting, keep it up.

You were right, I loved this poem/song! Its amazing. Do you write music to this? If not you should try it. Its fun and the poem/song gets a beat and rythym. Awsome Job :)

Nice...It would be a really cool song if done correctly. Some have great lyrics yet screw it all up with the music and vice versa. Thought that just overall this had been rather well done and liked how this was set up. Words complemented one another quite well.
~Faith-less