His eyes

by loretta Taylor   Jul 3, 2006


His Eyes

His eyes when young
Deep pools of chocolate
Drowning yourself in
Clear brown eyes
The depth of the sea
Smiling eyes
Looking at me

His eyes
Mirrored emotion
Smoldered with passion
Danced with glee
Snapped in anger
Laughed with me
In his eyes love I could see

His eyes
Sightless
No smoldering passion
No dancing with glee
No chocolate pools
No excitement
No caressing me

His eyes
Withered brown leaves
No emotion
Only empty despair
Just loneliness and pain
Showing there
Sad empty eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is really good. I just loved it. It was so beautiful! Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. This was really sad. I liked it alot though. I really loved how you twisted it around from the start. And the short lines were great, 'cause they held so much emotion and power in them. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    I enjoyed the turn of the poem, from an up-beat poem of attraction, to a low, deep, sad poem.
    well thought out and a wonderful read.

    thank you for the comment you left on my poem, greatly appreciated.

    keep well

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Thanks very much, for reading it,you have written some beautiful poetry. Any tips for me

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the imagery in your metaphors and the flow of the poem 5>>>

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