I love the imagery in your metaphors and the flow of the poem 5>>>

Thanks very much, for reading it,you have written some beautiful poetry. Any tips for me

I enjoyed the turn of the poem, from an up-beat poem of attraction, to a low, deep, sad poem.
well thought out and a wonderful read.

thank you for the comment you left on my poem, greatly appreciated.

keep well

**smile**

Wow. This was really sad. I liked it alot though. I really loved how you twisted it around from the start. And the short lines were great, 'cause they held so much emotion and power in them. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow that is really good. I just loved it. It was so beautiful! Great job on this! 5/5