Comments : The Mystic

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Very catchy first stanza. Excellent imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Wow I umm love this one! its very unique and imaginative...I can't wait to read some of your other poetry.
    ~~Retniapdooolb
    however I'm a little confused on the last 2 lines of the 1st stanza. what exactly does that mean??