Missed Your Chance

by Mousie   Jul 3, 2006


You missed your chance
I've waited in your trance.

Time has passed me by,
Now I have my wings to fly.

I've cried too many tears
I've overcome all my fears.

I'm moving on
And one day you'll be sad I'm gone.

You don't know what you have missed
All the happiness and bliss.

No more will i depend
On how much your heart can lend.

I'm on my own away from you
But because of this, I'm stronger too.

dedicated to ross... ::sticks tongue out:: so there! ha! (thank goodness he never goes on here!) =)

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  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very straight to the point:)...i think that you wrote this poem very well...it feels so free and deep...great Job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I thought it was really good! The 1st rhyme sounded a bit... forced, but other then that I really enjoyed it, it was well writen, and had a very good flow, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    Very well written!! Love can really suck!! But it will make you stronger!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Its a good poem but i think if you added more depth into your feelings and emotions rather than concentrating on rhyming it would be better. Explain the very depths of your feelings and keep writing. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    A short poem, but you got straight into it.. I liked it. Good work. 5/5

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