by Erica
I think the title is great polly. great poem too. especially the part where you said: |
"is an ever worse fear"... ever? do you mean even? 'even' seems to work there better, personally. |
by Natalie
Wow. Such a sad ending. But such a great poem. This was amazing hun. Keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
I love; Love Poems. And I think this one is amazing. In my oppinion the title is fine and fits with it. |
by Megann Lee
Wow. I really am a huge fan of your poems. Great write. I actually think the title to this poem works very well, with the poem. |
Really good , expresses alot of emotion . keep up the good work . |
by Melpomene
I really liked this poem i found it to have alot of emotions throughout it. It was expressed nicely. The twist and the ending was great. although i feel in some places that the word choice was too commen but not that much. Other then that well done on this poem. Liked the titles too btw! ~mel |