by Tainted Beauty Jul 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As were creeping through the bushes, |
Wow.. i love this another really great one.. is it about the pointless war in iraq.. lol bush stinks.. .. that is unless you like him.. then ill have to downrate you.. lol JKJKJK |
by Sole
A great poem, that displyas the true feelings of the men at war and brings together, nicely, the bitter regret of war. Beautiful poetry. |
by Tara Kay
Wow! that was so sad, it was awesomely written, with deep emotions and great imagery, keep writing |
by shobhana kumar
Wow. you've portrayed what goes on in so many minds because of these hopesles wars. |
by Darien
This was a wonderful poem. It brought to life the tragedy of a war. You gave us the perspective of a soldier and what they go through. Eventually you turn around and the message is clear, war is stupid. Really good job on this poem. |