GREAT word choice and descrption, i love it xo

(acrostic, not acoustic)

Since you could only make it 4 lines long. I thought you did a pretty good job on that. Again, You chose great choice of wording. It sounded beautiful. Keep it up! I love your work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Just like Ocean - this was great! I loved it . Keep up the good work!

**Samantha Hollywood

Beautiful write. Amazing word choice. The description was perfect for a rose. For such a short poem it is very descriptive! 5/5

Wow, you sure do have a talent for acrostic poetry. Great work, i loved the flow and rhymes and the whole poem was amasing.

--Steph

You are very talented! I love how you described the rose, beautful!! I also like your different writing styles! I really need to start working on that!!

This was also very well written. You are very good at writing acrostic poetry. Keep up the lovely work. You have an amazing talent!

~BJ~

Ok, Well i also loved this one, you come up with great things to write about..wish i could think of them!! oh well lol great job

Apparently...u are a natural talent wen it comes to acrostic poems...very interesting...u can fit so much meaning into such a short poem...bravo..5/5
oh and btw..thank you for commenting..but as for "The Day You Shed a Tear"...u can understand the meaning in different ways...but it has a story before it...see my best friend(i love her),well she tends to hurt herself instead of crying sometimes..so i kept asking her to cry..and she thought i wanted her to cry...so i told her that it really hurts me when she does and so on...she didnt seem convinced..so i wrote this poem for her..to show her its like the end of the world wen she sheds a tear :)