Not great. Had flaws what with the word choice and the flow. It felt almost...emotionless. Though it did have a logical way of how it moved to show what did happen throughout.
~Faith

Whoa...once again...jelousy issues...hey Faith, she's the most amazing writer i've EVER met, and so i think you should get the jelousy stick out of your BUTT and sit back and actually READ her poem...you just might LEARN something...mmmmk??my God...that chick pisses me off!! How can she say this poem isn't absolutely amazing!! i love you Cayti!! lol *tee hee* sorry...got a LITTLE mad...lol xoxo