Weeping Willow

by put the [boom boom] into my heart   Jul 3, 2006


The tree always seemed tattered on the hollow ground. The ground there had never been fertile, yet the tree lived on throughout each year. It was dull and thick. In the summer, during rainshowers, it's leaves had no sheen. The branches were brittle and tended to arc a little more each day. There seemed to be a conspiracy against the tree. Nothing ever went there. No birds. No small animals. No young picnicing couples. It was pallid and alone. Each circle of bark on the tree had it's very own enigma. It's vivid past and fading future had little differentiation. When the sheenless summer rains would come, the puddles surrounding the empty tree conveyed pity. Not because no one was around, but because no one was around to see them. The slight sound of the raindrops clapping against the puddles seemed to echo all around the tree. From a distance, the raindrops could easily be mistaken for tears, but the tree could not cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    WHOA!! CAYTI!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!! lol...you're so descriptive...it really got me thinking!! and yes...i would be happy to catch your drool anytime you like...haha how's Petey the tummie worm? are you still feeding him good? lol haha I LOVE YOU!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bitter-Sunlight

    You just inspired me!