by *Sweet as your worst nightmare* Jul 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Take your lies from your mouth, |
by Biscuit
Peice = piece |
Wow--that was a great poem. I could feel the emotions, some anger in it that you expressed really well. It is a strong poem-The only critique I have is that the flow was off on one line...The eye candy line...but maybe thats just me--Great write! 5/5 Keep it up! |