Comments : Baby

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    No matter who may try to end it

    We'll never let it go.

    That reminds me so much of my boyfriend and I... All of it did. Great poem...Strong and confident.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This is a lovely sweet poem with just a tinge of sadness.

    The little things mean the most
    Like when you call me baby

    These are my favourite lines because it really is the little things that mean the most.

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I dont like the spacing. try to write in stanzas insead of one line at a time, it really does break the poem up.

    i like this bit :

    'I never know just when
    But i always know just how'

    -biscuit-