WOW!!!! amazing poem ohmygosh!
I dont really get it .. lol but it sounded good. maybe you can explain it to me or something sometime. Well this is an amazing poem!!!! great job!

Hmm, you really like that rhyme and style. Haha, good stuff. This was another good poem.

The ending brought the whole poem together. I loved your choice of words for certain images, it made the poem unique. Great! I loved it.

Another great poem--The flow is amazing and the rhyme really made the piece that much better. Once again, loved the description and the way you ended it-All your poems are amazing. 5/5