This poem is good, your word choice was good, but it's nothing exceptional like your recent ones. I can tell this is an older poem, because i can see your progression. 4/5

Like i said before, your talented, all your poems flow together perfectly, all 5/5!!! keep makong great poems!!!

I liked the flow of this one...... it was so lovely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson