Comments : Betrayl

  • 18 years ago

    by Rin

    Oh sweetie are you ok because this poem makes me think you never talk about this. It is so sad,the poem is. remeber i am here for you

  • 18 years ago

    by Xavier

    Hey, i thought your poem was very good, maybe if it rhymed a little more it would be close to perfect, well other than that great job.
    xavier

  • 18 years ago

    by tayXcore

    Nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Cool awsome its more than a 5 its a billion!!!!!!!1