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by Lindsey Jul 4, 2006 category : Love, romance / lost love
The star was his beacon He held her in his sight And when the sea was stormy She guided him in the night She stayed for the security She knew she was giving But standing in one place Can hardly be called living Her strength began to flicker From standing still so long She looked to him for guidance And kept trying to be strong She cried for him to help And save her light from dying But he turned his back And sadly she stopped prying Her legs began to cramp And she fell to her knees Her shoulders buckled under And she cried -help me, please! She never gave up loving him Not even in the end The final thought that crossed her mind? Im glad I was his friend And in her dying moment She decided on a gift A last glimpse of comfort To repair the friendship rift She summoned up her courage And let go of the sky and in that graceful moment She said her final goodbye
by Bitter-Sunlight
Wow. If there;s one thing I'll always appreciate in a poem [[and hope to achieve]] is good rythim. your poem has a wonderful rythim! It just flows so easily so smoothly and so nicely... I love it. especially the first stanza...
by sandy
Awe this poem is amazing. keep writing hun