My Horrible Mistake

by sandy   Jul 4, 2006


"If you want to leave
Go right ahead
I won't be in your way,"
I said

My horrible mistake
Was letting him leave
He was my biggest goal
I failed to achieve

If I had just told him to stay
Then he'd still be here
Whispering all these amazing things
In my right ear

With him around
Things felt right
With him gone
I can't sleep at night

Now I can't reach him
He left so far away
But if he was here
I'd say,

"Baby come back,
I made a mistake letting you go
Hold me in your arms
And my love; I'll show"

In a dream he turned to me
And smiled with a spark in his eye
Getting my hopes up as he said,
"Goodbye"

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  • 18 years ago

    by yungin

    Good ryhmin skills it was a good poem.. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Star

    This is a really good poem I like the rhyming and I try to rhym as much as I can in my poems I just couldn't think of one in the last part and I really like ur thoughts in this

  • 18 years ago

    by Raydeen

    Fricken love this poem, even though it's really sad. keep up the good writing sexy lady =).

    Ray

  • 18 years ago

    by KaTii3

    This is very deep and loving in a heartbreaking kinda way. 5 Stars From Me! Keep It Fresh

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    So saddddd! good writing. but soo so sad... :( it'll be okay