Sandcastles

by Liquid Dreams   Jul 4, 2006


Building sandcastles
With you by my side
Our hands softly touching
Our faces we hide

The waves lap the shore
The ocean\'s so blue
I\'d rather do nothing
Than be here with you

You know that I\'m blushing
You smile with glee
We hold a warming gaze
As we stand at the sea

The salt in the water
The chill in the air
But you promise you love me
You promise you care

Your arms hold me tender
Your love is so sweet
We kiss in the water
The sand at our feet

The waves come in stronger
You hold me closer still
I love how you protect me
And shelter me with will

The sandcastle is swept away
By the force of the waves
But our love is much stronger
Our love always stays

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwwwww!! Soo sweeet! lol I suck at writing love poems! I wish I could write one like that! You did a wonderful job on it! Keep writing!! =]

    Cayce x

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Whoa.. that ones by far my favourite. im actually pretty speechless.. i loved these lines though:

    Your arms hold me tender
    Your love is so sweet
    We kiss in the water
    The sand at our feet

    it gave me chills haha.. well not really but you know what i mean. i loved it...

    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by heart_of_swords

    That is soo good, i reali like it... i wish it would happen to me... hopefully it will - one day:P oh well - well done:)

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