That is soo good, i reali like it... i wish it would happen to me... hopefully it will - one day:P oh well - well done:)

Whoa.. that ones by far my favourite. im actually pretty speechless.. i loved these lines though:

Your arms hold me tender
Your love is so sweet
We kiss in the water
The sand at our feet

it gave me chills haha.. well not really but you know what i mean. i loved it...

dee

Awwwwww!! Soo sweeet! lol I suck at writing love poems! I wish I could write one like that! You did a wonderful job on it! Keep writing!! =]

Cayce x