by Michael D Nalley Jul 4, 2006
category :
Special events /
independence day
One Nation Under God |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |
Stupendous poem, they say i'm good but i don't hold a candle to you |
Well written and great flow to it amazing keep it up |
I really liked this... Your first two stanzas, though, were much stronger than your last.. |
by Courtney
Hi you don't knoww me but I just joined yesturday, Your poem was the first one that I read, and by the way it is really really good. Do you ever think of publishing? Cause maybe you should. |