Thank you for poem this is very nice poem

Again, capitalization. I can see the devotion put into it though, very respectful.

I loooove this poem. It was so well written great work Hun.

This was soo sweet. it really does show what true love is about. everyone has different ways of saying there love for there partner but this way was beautiful. great job!

Great poem; devotion and sincerity come across clearly. Wonderful love poem.

So sweet.

Great pome but felt like u needed more punctuation at the end of lines so the reader knows how to read it. good job yet again!

Ehh i dont really like this poem. it didnt flow too well and it confused me. not your best work.

and this line doesnt make sense..
Being my love, is such a great

i know you can do better. i see this is an old poem and you have gotten better=]

WoW ur poem was very nice n good 5/5

The rhyming pattern was wierd
the structure and flow was of
but the message was strong

You have the parental for grate talent as a poet I did not see this in the first couple of poems I read from you however I have seen it in the last few just do some work on your grammar and you could become very good.

This is a really good poem. The first stanza might need a little work on it, overall it's really good. Great job! 5/5

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