by Tainted Beauty Jul 4, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Here we are, all grown up, |
Ok so im definitly adding you to my favorites.. another really great one |
by Driver
Excellent poem. you can sense your care for your friend. well written. good job. |
by Sole
Wow. I feel I can relate to this a lot, but not at such an extreme scale. Very nice work - the rhymning and flow were perfection. |
by Tiny Reader
Seems to end rather abruptly, and that's a shame because it left me expecting more. Try not to let your readers down. You don't really need the comma's at the end of each line, but overall, nice poem. |
by Tara Kay
This was absolutely awesome, i love friendship poems, and i loved this one so much, i can relate as some of my close friends, i have not seen in years and I miss them. |