Take it 2day aint a gud day 4 u eiva den? As usual a well-written, perfectly flowing piece by you that puts into words wot so any people feel but just don't know how to express.
In reply 2 ur comment on my poem no I don't feel better yet and i won't till dat girl learns 2 accept dat ur wiv sum1 else (and no she doesn't even get the dignity ov a name). But NEway I'll talk more bout dat wiv u 2nyt cos I unlyk sum ppl realise dat an INTERNATIONAL website is not a place 2 advertise personal business and I actually have the decency to when possible to try and talk 2 ppl face 2 face, ( k im dun wiv da digs now!!)
I Love You 2,
Beth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I really like how you put a spin on the suicide concept "but if it wasn't in my hands, i could give it a try" never heard it put like before. Keep writing, this peom was amazing!

Heather Marie