by Tine Jul 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
With her arms and eyes wide open |
by Rachel RTVW
This is one of the saddest poems I have read in a while. I think you did a good job. I like to read poems like these through the eyes of someone else that is not in the health care field...It's insightful and thought provoking. Excellent job. |
by Russ
That's beautiful...i like the repetition of "in a month or so" it really drew me into the poem...5/5 |
Long time no talk my dear but truely an inspiring peice well thought out. You get a rather lovely 5. Stay strong sweetie. xxx |
by Sar
A sad poem, that flowed really well. a lot of emotion 5/5 |
by Little Dot
This poem had so much emotion in it. It was written beautifully. Good work. |